
Oh give me a piece
of this lustrous moon
And it’s light
will I capture
to walk through
the dark passage
of time so roguish
and uncertain
Oh, the cool
and invigorating embrace
of this piece of moon,
to this bothered soul
will soothe its
qualms about
the world,
so opinionated
yet passive
And oh,
till the last drop
will I extract,
the essence
of its sobriety
So that
in the battle
to exhibit
the plethora of
“All that glitters”,
I unveil
my sublime simplicity.
Β© 2020 | Prerna |
Simply amazing!
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Thank you so much Rishika! ππ
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I’m amazed by the standard of ur vocabulary and elegant use of it to make ur piece seem luxurious! π
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating! I am so happy to know you like it ππ
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From this mind-catching Moon (poem)=we now know how exciting was the first man who landed on the Moon *&* did the Moon walk!
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment!
Oh of course, what an amazing feeling it must be π
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no doubt
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Oh, the Moon! I love your poem and the profound meaning disguised within. “The world so opinionated but passive”. I have an affinity with the moon and always check the canyons and mountains so clearly visible on the light side of the full moon. Thank you.
Joanna
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Thank you so much dear Joanna! I am so glad that you love the poem, and that my words could resonate.
Oh I can imagine the scenery! A lovely sight it must be π
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Beautiful poem, Prena! β€ The moon has been a source of inspiration for all of human history and never loses its appeal! π When I wake during the night, I go ou to look at the night sky. Take care, Cheryl
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Thank you so much, Cheryl! Of course, the moon never fails to impress π I adore the night sky too!
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Beautiful beautiful beautiful. You captured the magnificence and the soothing essence of the moon so well. Love it so much π€β€β€β€
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Aww thank you so much Wardah! Means a lot.
I am so glad I was able to do that ππ
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You’re welcome!! π€
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Wow!! This is so beautiful!β€οΈ
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Thank you so much Hemalatha! πΈ
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Always amazing with pen & beautiful words, loved your imaginary turned into beautiful verse.ππ
Keep writing!ππ
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Thank you so much Prashant for always reading and motivating π
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My pleasure and keep writing!π
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Of course!
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Love how you take inspiration from the moon. Beautiful poemπ
How the first part is the moon giving us light in our dark times. The moon giving strength to a doubtful or fearful soul in the second, to withstand the opinions of others. And embracing the totality of the moon in the last part, to shine our inner light but to do so in sublime simplicity like the moon.
Love the metaphorsπ
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True. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading! I am glad you grabbed the essence of the poem so beautifully π
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Great writing!
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Thank you so much π
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This is such a profound and poignant poem! Love the way the you’ve written this. β€οΈ
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Oh thank you so much, Rishika! ππ
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Such a wonderfully written piece. πππ β€οΈ Cindy
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Thank you so much Cindy! ππ
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you are so welcome!
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Undoubtedly beautiful!π
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Thanks a ton! ππ
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Beautiful and awesome poetic words so well composed, Prerna. Too good.
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Thank you so much dear Kamal! Glad you like it π
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Welcome Prerna. Very nice ππ
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Really loved how the lines ooze with passion. The last line was my poison. Excellently work Prerna. π
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Oh thank you so much Harsh! Means a lot π
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The Pleasure is all mine Prerna. π
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Thanks Era! π
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Pleasure π
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Beautifully written, my dear β€οΈ
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Thanks a lot Shweta! ππ
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My pleasure π
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Amazing! Simply beautiful
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Thanks a lot HS! πΈ
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A soothing calm moon. Amazingly writtenπ
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Thank you so much dear! ππ
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Amazing poetry!
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Thanks a ton! π
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Really beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much Pooja! ππ
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You’re very welcome π
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Wow Amazing ππ
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Thank you so much dear ππ
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Awesome…love the pic so much
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Thank you so much Smitha! ππ
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Your choice of words are beautiful π
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Thank you so much dear π
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Very beautiful poetry!!
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Thank you so much Sakshi! π
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Wow, amazed by your thought and use of words
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Thank you so much dear Meenakshi ππ
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Wow what a lines! Extraordinary poem feels interesting one! π
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Thank you so much Praneeth! π
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Beautiful lines. Soooo glad to come across another Selenophile. Even I have written a blog on my undying love for the moon.ππ
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Thank you so much! Oh I would love to read it π
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So sublime! wonderfully written π
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Thanks a lot! Glad you like it π
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So, you too a fan of moon?
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Of course! It stays with me during the darkest times, giving me peace and solace π
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So amazingly written. You have got great skill, Prerna. Keep penning your thoughts. πβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much Megha! I am so happy to know that you liked it ππ
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Wow! It’s amazing in its simplicity! π Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much! ππ
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She inspires so much beautiful creativity like the poem that you shared. She has frequently been my muse too. Thank you.
Tim
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Yes, she’s always been an inspiration! Thank you so much for reading and appreciating π
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Such a beauty in your words π¦ππ
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Thank you so much dear Akshita! πΈπ
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Your most welcome
The pleasure is all mineπ€π€π
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Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot Rekha! π
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Lovely, such a great choice of words π
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Thank you so much Nehal! π
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So beautiful….
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Thank you so much! π
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This poem is so inspired… it’s magical. I love the second stanza especially. It feels very familiar somehow. But totally original also. Love!! And thank you so much for visiting my site just now!! I feel truly honoured. πππ
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Oh thank you so much Lia! So glad to know that you liked it π it was a pleasure to visit your side π
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You expressed your thoughts so vividly here. A lovely read. π
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Thank you so much Samreen! So glad you like it π
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Your welcome π
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Beautiful πΌπβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks a lot dear! πΈπ
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Amazing poetry!
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Thanks a ton! π
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Amazing!β€
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Thanks a lot ππ
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So beautifully written!! :’)
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Thanks a lot Ket!! π
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“The Moon’s silvery beauty mirror the reflection
of wonder comprising the mesmerizing beauty of the Solar Sytem!”
_-Van Prince
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True!! Thank you for stopping by π
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My pure-sure-true pleasure!
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Wonderful π€©
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Thanks a lot dear! πΈ
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As soothing as the moon π
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Thank you so much dear! ππ
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Sometimes,
moonbeam torchlight through a dark sky
is the only lifeline I can hold.
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Ahh true! π Thank you for stopping by!
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I loved how you expressed the beauty of Moon !
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Thanks a lot dear ππ
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Such a mystic and surreal poem!! Love it!!π
“I unveil
my sublime simplicity.”
Such a wonderful end!
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Thank you so much dear! Delighted by your wonderful comment π
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This is such a cool poem!π€©π
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Thanks a lot Ella!! ππ
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