Spaces

Divine spaces
in stirring souls
Nebulae between stars
Fields between particles
Blackouts between dreams
Crackling, sparks between flames
Ascent and descent between notes
Stillness between breaths
I am somewhere between
tripping and rising
Unfathomable sigh 
~Inside spaces~
Sigh unfathomable
Rising and tripping
Between somewhere am I
Breaths between stillness
Notes between descent and ascent
Flames between sparks, crackling
Dreams between blackouts
Particles between fields
Stars between nebulae
Souls stirring in
spaces divine

192 thoughts on “Spaces

  1. This is so cool and beautifully written, Prerna! I love this so much!! Such a creative idea and you carried it out so well πŸ₯°πŸ’•
    Love these lines especially:
    “I am somewhere between
    tripping and rising”
    So beautiful!

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  2. Wow, this is fantastic! Reading through it, it felt very wave like yet reflective… then finding out it was a palindrome it all made sense as to how the symmetry felt so perfect by the end! Never saw a poem of this style before. Wonderful work!

    Like

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