
This heart a box of memories blue
of silent prayers and a thousand elegies;
of sluggish dawns after a painful loss,
wounding our grief with yesterday.
But O heart heart heart
tattered by the brutal past
Accept what comes from silence
Let light permeate your conscience.
For those, who we have lost, may not return
But oh, there may come a moment of renaissance,
of a vision that’s beautiful and rare,
to heal the bruise I daily wear.
Oh let those crystalline moments shine
like musical notes, ascend forever
For the miles away they ventured;
we’ve still miles to go.
© 2021 | Prerna |
The poem touched my heart. I enjoyed it very much!
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Thank you Niyathi. Glad you liked it ❤
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Wow I just love your vocabulary (elegy) Orr about rhyming abb kya hi bolu. About poem, it was perfect, it’s always great reading you.
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Ahaha thank you so much Shivam!
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Welcome back Prerna. Loved the poem!
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Thank you Nawazish ❤
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Oh my the pain is so beautifully described Prerna. ❤️
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Thank you so much Radhika ❤
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A very touching poem, you write beautifully!
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Thanks a lot Diane! 💕
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so touching! back with a bang!!
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Ah thank you so much Akshita 💖
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This is so beautiful and reviving. ❤
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Thanks a lot Shreya 💗
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Loved it
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Glad you loved it ❤
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Beautiful and heart touching poem
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Thank you so much Tanvir!
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Welcome back indeed Prerna – it’s been a while. Grief has been a visitor to my life more times than I can honestly say I am comfortable. I found from my chilhood recollections,the night was the worst; fear was my frequent antagonist.Now,in the experience of my adult life, the same antagonist visits at all times of the day and night.My comfort was coming to know that the antagonist has only one stage on which to perform – my mind.It is my mind that carries my loss, my loneliness, my grief. I decided; the stage of my mind belongs to me, I am sole director of all productions on this stage. The antagonist is barred from all performances. Besides, what the antagonist never told me was: “This too shall pass, and the best is yet to come…I send you love and light and many blessings. Peter
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Thank you so much sir. This comment is so beautiful and true. Words to live by. I’ll come here to read this whenever I’ll feel low.
Sometimes in their pain, people believe that the agony will last forever. But feelings are more like weather systems—they blow in and they blow out.
Hope you have a lovely day
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Prerna, an exquisitely beautiful poem. Poignant and lovely! ❤ All the best!
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Thank you so much Cheryl. So glad you liked it 💗
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These words are beautiful words. Yes, yes, yes. I like beautiful words lined up like this. They put me in a good place.
Thank you. I love it here. Be well. I wish you miracles.
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Thank you for the beautiful comment. I’m so glad you loved the writing.
Have a lovely day ❤
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I missed reading your poems. It felt so good to read it today! Beautiful as usual 💗
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Ah thank you so much Hemalatha! ❤
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A heart that feels pain and happiness too, awesome poem, Prerna.
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Thank you so much, Kamal ❤
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Always welcome dear Prerna 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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That was so heart touching and emotional. I can understand the pain because even I lost some important people in my life. I hope you heal with time.
Take care and stay safe 🙂
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I’m so sorry to hear that. The pandemic took away so many precious lives.
Thank you so much for the compliment. Sending love and light your way 💫
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Thankyou 🙂 That means a lot. Love you ♥
Stay safe and take care
Good day/ night
xoxo ❤
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Poignant emotions beautifully expressed, Prerna. ❤️
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Thank you so much, Punam ❤
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So beautiful 💖💖💖….
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Thank you so much Aadya! ❤💫
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I love it !
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Thank you. Glad you loved it!
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That’s such a lovely sentiment, Prerna.
❤
David
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Thank you so much, David. Glad you liked it ✨
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Beautiful poem…🙂
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Thank you so much! ✨
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My pleasure reading. 😊
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A poignant piece.
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Thank you Magarisa ❤
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You’re welcome.
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Heart a magnet 🧲
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True 🙂
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Wow! So touching. Well shared ☺️🌹❤️
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Thank you so much, Priti ❤😊
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My pleasure 🤗🤗 stay happy and blessed forever ❤️❤️☺️🎊🍫
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Beautiful piece.
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Thank you Gabriela ❤
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My pleasure.
xoxo
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This is so beautiful, Prerna. I love the quiet rhythm, the subtle rhyme, and oh, that yearning. Gorgeous.
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Thank you so much! So glad you loved it 💫
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This poem talked to me. I remembered the people that have gone from my life, and was sad until I thought of looking forward to the new people I will meet.
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It’s indeed heartbreaking to lose a loved one. Thank you so much for this beautiful comment. Sending love and light your way 💫
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You have a lovely opening line and the accompanying photograph adds another depth of nostalgia for me!
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Thank you so much, Jaya! ❤
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Lovely🌹🌹
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Thank you ❤
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Loved it!!
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Thank you !!
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The vocabulary you used is great!
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Thank you Khushi ❤
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lovely post!! loved reading it
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Thank you ❤
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Wow, this is BRILLIANT, Prerna! Very poignant and heartfelt. Love the sequence of flow of imagery. You are an incredible poetess. Marvellous creation!
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Thank you so much Samrakshni!! So glad you loved it ❤
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