My sanity screams
as the demons inside me, rage
Bloodshot eyes, gleam
in a dark rattling cage
Oh how, the murky sinister twilight
grazes a crimson battlefield
as the angels and demons, inside
a battle loud and clear, they fight
(seen or heard by none)
Call to these angels;
defend against
those gruesome demons
Weaken them
Draw them back
Lock them up,
back in the cage
They shall not be killed
for they are a part of me;
And a part, you cannot destroy
without the whole, crumbling
My angels, close the shutter
keep them confined
They shall not be killed
but escape, shall none;
For, a monster, you cannot kill
without being one.
© 2020 | Prerna |
The Devil whispered:
“it’s always been betrayal, heartbreak and lies.
Too much torment, can’t you see?”
“Just keep the patience” Echoed a voice.
That’s when I burnt the angel inside me.
Your last line was a 💥💣
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“They shall not be killed…. Part of me.”
Amazing. See! No colours and I felt this poem.
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Thank you so much Yash! Haha I am so glad you felt the poem 😊
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Whaaat, you burnt the angel?! 🤦🏻♀️
She was trying to give you first aid! 🥺
Keep the devils in mind and save some angels for your heart.
Thanks a lott!
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Bas try hi kia ja rha tha. Dia nahi ja rha tha.
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Aree aapne dene nahi diya naa 🤦🏻♀️ Now don’t let the devils manipulate you, okay? 😊
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Alright 👍
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Yeah the last line is simply awesome…reminded me of the song by Imagine Dragons “Demons”. Its wonderfully written yaar….kamaal hai 👏🏻👏🏻
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The two sides of each of us, that is how I relate. You are great.
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True. We all have angels and demons inside us- always pulling the strings.
Thank you so much for your kind words 😊
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Amazing penned Prena! 🥰🥰 Everyone has a demon part and an angel part. Very well said Prena! I must say your writing skills inspire me everyday. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poetry.
Sending lots of happiness and best wishes your way
Anushka ❤️
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That’s true, Anushka!
Thank you so much dear 😊 your lovely words have filled my heart with happiness and sunshine 💖
Have a beautiful day! 💫
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Your welcome ❤️
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Prerna, I love this poem! Simply marvelous!
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Thank you so much Rishika! Delighted to know that you loved the poem 💕
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😊💕
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This is amazing Prerna! The last line is wow!🤩❣
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Thank you so much Nawazish! I am so glad you liked it 😀💖
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This is so beautiful.
I love the way you express complex human emotions…
Keep shining..
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Thank you so much Lavanya! I am delighted that you love the writing 😊
Have a lovely day 🌸
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Same to you❤
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A demon inside demon…
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Two negatives can make a positive 😊
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Hope no one gets hurt…
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Hehe I hope so too!
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Loved it 💙
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Thanks a lot, Era! 💖
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😊😊
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Wow… how do you manage that? 😲
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Keep the angels on guard!
Thank you for reading 😀
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The imagery. Is just. So. Amazing. I’m in love with this poem! The whole thing is so powerful, and the last 2 lines are just, wow. Lovely writing! Hope all is well 👏💓
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Thank you so much wardah! I am glad you liked the poem. Truly means a lot! 😊
I am well. Hope you’re doing good 💖
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You’re welcome!! Glad to hear that, I’m doing good too 😇
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😀😀
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Amazing concept of duality within our head and mind..
and the line is so perfect 🙂
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Thank you so much Nima! Glad you liked it 😀💗
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Most welcome Prerna 🙂
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A thoughtfully articulated poem that expresses the strife between the angels and demons within us… Really liked the poem 😊
Awaiting your next post!
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Thank you so much Kashvee! I am delighted to know that you liked the poem 😊💕
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Amazing. Yin and Yang. At least find some positive side even if all covered over negative. Good one. I like it.
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This is slightly different than yin and yang, isn’t it? Because yin-yang balance each other out, but here – in Prerna’s poem – one side is controlling the other. What do you think?
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The angels should always keep the demons under control, and that is what creates balance! Demons will always try to come out when provoked. And angels will always try to guard the soul. Without the devils, where would are angels go?
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Couldn’t the angels simply be free to express themselves if they weren’t so busy battling back the demons?
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And that is how the angels express- by battling the demons and setting the mind free 😀
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As per chinese theory yin and yang simplified as there is a good in super bad also and there is bad traces in excellent things also. Yin and yang not balances it shows appearances in all structures. Once side control others means a good or bad present in simple way. The chinese things always complex and can be understood in different ways so it may be complex.
I am sorry if i confuse you with my statement and this can be taken casually and not in complex way. Have a wonderful day ahead. Cheers 🙏🙋♂️🍀
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Wow thank you so much for this wonderful comment! This gave me a deeper insight 😀
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You are most welcome. Wish you a cheerful weekend too. 🙋♂️🍀🌱
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“They shall not be killed
for they are a part of me”
Wow, beautifully penned! ❤️
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Thank you so much Pavithra! 😊💖
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“For, a monster, you cannot kill
without being one.”
Wow! Just wow
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Thanks a lot Akshita! 😀💗
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I like your play on the angels and demons concept. Amazing💫
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Oh thank you so much Aarushi! So glad you like it 😊💕
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Have you read Dan Brown’s novel ” Angels and Demons”? Usme is baare me boht bola hai. I like the way u write. Its creative and conveys the emotion inside you. Well done👌👌
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Oh yes, I have read it!
Thank you so much for this lovely comment. So glad you like the writings! Truly means a lot 😀
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Another wow,
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Thanks a lot Shivam! 😀
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The battle of the duality, good and evil within us…absolutely well written Prerna. Loved the phrases you used here ❤ !
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Thank you so much dear Radhika! I’m delighted to know, you liked the writing 😊💕
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Woooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww …,, am so awestruck that I can’t stop writing d w’s.. heheh 😏
The way u end is fantabulous
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Thank you sooooooooo much Kripaa! Such a lovely comment! So glad you enjoyed the writing 😀💖
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Oh myy, this was so deep yet refreshing
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Thank you so much Nisha! 😊💖
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A beautiful poem on Angels and Demons, Prerna. Battle between the good and evil and the picture too is perfect.
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Thank you so much dear! I am so glad you liked the poem and the picture 🙏🏻💗
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You are always welcome dear Prerna ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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The last lines of this piece went straight to my heart! I think we all have a little monster within us but we have angels inside us too.
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That’s true Jaya 😊
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I am so delighted that you could connect with it so deeply ✨
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SMiLes For me
At Least Play
With
the
Shadow
So No one
Ever Sees
It Strike
Out With
Teeth
Just
Enough
To Say
NO Loud
And
Clear
To All
Injustices
Otherwise
Snowflakes
Fall With
No
Solid
Gravity..:)
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Ooh thank you so much for this beautiful comment!
Thank you for stopping by 😊
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My Pleasure
Thanks
So Much
For Your
Inspiring Words!😁🙌
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, 😀✨
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😁
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Absolutely amazing and deeply beautiful! You did this so perfectly – having us look inti ourselves to find what we are fighting, wanting to escape/get rid of, where are we looking to become whole? We cannot kill a part without crumbling the whole – so brilliant!
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Thank you so much dear. Your kind words have thrilled me!
True. I’m so glad you could connect with the poem so deeply 😀💖
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You are very welcome 💛
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Oh I love the duality and depth of these words Prerna! love it! ❤️
Cindy
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Thank you so much, Cindy! 😊💕
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You’re sooo welcome! 💕
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This is so well written Prerna!
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Thanks a lot dear! 😀🌸
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Wow, nice!
For, a monster, you cannot kill
without being one. 😀
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Thank you so much Rez! Glad you like it 😀💗
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Wow, thought provoking! Well penned 👌🏼
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Thank you soo much!! 😀❤
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Hi! I have nominated you for the libster award. Please check it out and do participate if u have time. No pressure 😊
Anushka
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This is so so well written. The battle between the angle and demon is so well articulated. And How you ended this whole piece is amazing. Loved it.
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Thank you so much Yeshu! I’m delighted by your lovely comment. Glad you loved the writing 😊💖
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Beautifully penned, love this poem❤️
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Thank you so much Samreen! 😊💕
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You are welcome Prerna 💖😊
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Marvellous write, Prerna!
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Thanks a lot Punam! 💕
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You are welcome, dear. ❤️
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Beautiful poem about angel and demon that always have a fight inside most of us.
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Thank you so much dear! 😊💫
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Hi prena! Hope you are doing good, I have nominated you for Liebster Award. Pls accept it, I would love if you participate in it. Do check it out😀😀😊
Lots of love
Anushka❤️
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Woww thank you so much Anushka! I am so honored. Gonna check it out for sure 😀💖
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Your welcome 😘😍 I had to as u have a beautiful blog
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😀💕
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So beautifully expressed the fight we have inside ourselves as angels and demons !!
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Thank you so much Harshita! 💖
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Such powerful writing! I absolutely loved reading this, Prerna. 💘
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Thank you so much Rishika! Glad you loved it 😊💕
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Beautiful words depicting the angel and demon tug of war in each of us 👌👌
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Thank you so much! 😀✨
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Nice work. Lovely use of words
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Thanks a million! 💫
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Anytime. Looking forward to seeing more
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Loved the concept to the core
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Thank you! Glad you liked it 😊
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Beautiful expression…
Stay blessed 🙏😇
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Thank you so much! 😊🙏🏻
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It’s best to fight demons with words. Words that disprove them, words that validate angels, words that make them disappear.
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I agree. Very well said!
Thank you for reading 😊
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Was a pleasure.
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Hi prena! How are you doing… Well I was just writing this comment because it’s been long time, I hope you are doing gud.
Loads of love 💕
Anushka
Happy holidays
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Hey Anushka! Aww that’s really sweet of you dear 💖 I’m doing good 😊 how are you?
Warm hugs 💫
Prerna
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Doing just gud!! 😊🌺 it had been so long so I decided to ask if everything is well on ur side?
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All well! 😊 Thank you for asking 💕
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Ur welcome dearie!😊❤️
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🙌🏻🔥🌹
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😀💖
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I loved your poem and the subject matter.. also has piqued my thoughts…I made a small YouTube poem called, Dealing With Demons…that has a different point of view in the same battle:) I hope you enjoy it. https://karimahoisan.com/2020/10/08/dealing-with-demons-on-youtube/
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Thank you so much dear!
I just saw your post and video. The poem and it’s concept is beautiful 💖 I very much agree with you! 😀
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Thank you for taking a peek at the video/poem. It’s an interesting discussion..no matter how you see it:)
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True!
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Awesome poem
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Thank you!
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The last two lines sum up the entire piece so beautifully. Thanks for sharing💖
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Thank you for reading! 😀
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Wow, that last line!
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Thank you 😀
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