
I’m engulfed
in a chilling facade
Tightness in chest
and burning veins;
A deceitful warmth doth flow
Icy claws of
the dark deep
brought me hither
to pull me apart;
Secrets of the dead
they whisper
My sanity
slowly withers
Hands now impatient
to grab remnants
of a decaying soul
Phantasmal waves
of anxiety
caress the lines
of my palm
to gingerly untangle
and leave them
to fade away
Two bubbles
of sweet hope
rising to the surface,
leave me behind
as I drown in thoughts;
To breathe
is to surrender
Inside me,
two people
pulling the strings;
Breathe in death
or breathe out life
A rendezvous of
gazillion sensations
inside
A cluster of bubbles
outside
as I slowly embrace
the endless gray...
© 2020 | Prerna |
Such a wonderful expression in a poem! Keep on sharing!
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Thanks a million, dear! 😊💕
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You’re much welcome!
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Powerful
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Thank you Rachana! 😊
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😊
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You will find light,
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Of course! Darkness is my candle ✨
Thank you for reading 😊
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Darkness is my candle, come on now, wow
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😁😁
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Dark and beautiful!
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Thank you so much Punam! 😊💕
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My pleasure. 😊
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Omg..this is such a lovely piece.
Well penned prerna🤗❤
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Oh thank you so much Akshita!! 😊💖
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My pleasure prerna🤗❤
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Such fluidity 🍂
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Thank you Aman! Glad you like it 😊
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Wow…such an amazing poem.
Its deep. Loved this one.
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Thank you so much Simran! I am so delighted to know that you loved the poem 😊💖
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😊😊
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👏👏💗
Love this, Prerna!
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Thanks a lot, Rishika!! So glad you like it 😊💖
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😊💗
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Wow Prerna….such depth….I can feel it🎀😍💐
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Thank you so much Ruelha! I am so glad you liked it 😊💖🌸
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This writing brings many thoughts. Its depth is beautiful.
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you could connect with it 😊
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I felt the power behind each word!!
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I am glad you could connect with the writing!
Thank you for reading 😊
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beautiful 🤩🥰
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Thank you so much!! 😊
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Beautifully written, Prerna. Expresses what may be going through the mind of a suicidal person, something I always struggle to understand. Take care, cheryl
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Thank you so much Cheryl!
Yes, it can be thought of in that way too 😀
Have a nice day! 🌸
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“Icy claws of
the dark deep
brought me hither
to pull me apart;
Secrets of the dead
they whisper
My sanity
slowly withers
Hands now impatient
to grab remnants
of a decaying soul
Phantasmal waves
of anxiety”
Wow. Beautifully described, debilitating anxiety. Personal experience, or imagination, it makes me wonder? But no need to answer. :)) I myself have a couple of times felt something akin to what you’ve written in these stanzas, that’s why I ask. Either way, chillingly lovely poem. 💛🌻
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Thank you so much Lia!! The poem is inspired by my various experiences – drowning, swimming and…choking on water 😅
I’m glad you were able to connect with the poem!
Thanks again 💖
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Oh wow. That sounds very frightening. Glad you are alright. :)) 💖
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Wow!! Such profound words
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Thank you so much! Glad you like it 😊
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The pleasure is all mine. Keep up the amazing post
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😀😀
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🙂
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Love this, great poetic expression 🙂
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Thank you so much! 💖
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Sublime..beautiful lines🙂
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Thanks a lot dear! 🌸
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I really loved this piece, its one of your most amazing piece in your blog. Your poetry has such good meaning and vocabulary. The one of the best things I loved in this piece that it is inspired by your experiences. “keep writing and shining”😍💕😊
sending best wishes your way
Anushka
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Wow thank you so much Anushka!! Thrilled to know that you enjoy my poetry 😀 This made my day! 💖
Sending lots of love and light ✨
Prerna
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Your welcome 😊😘
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Guten Tag.
Wunderbare Worte:
Wer wagt es so wie Sie
im wirklichen Leben
in das Land
der Toten
zu steigen
obwohl alle
Vorfahren
in unserer Seele
ihre Wohnstatt
haben?
Die Umarmung
gilt auch den
unerlösten Seelen
damit man
das Geschenk
des Lebens feiern
sich an ihm
erfreuen darf
und kann
Herzliche Grüße
Hans Gamma
***
Good day.
Wonderful words:
Who dares like you
in real life
into the country
the dead
to rise
though all
ancestors
in our soul
their abode
to have?
The hug
also applies to
unredeemed souls
so that one
the gift
celebrate of life
to him
can enjoy
and can
Best regards
Hans Gamma
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Lovely thoughts! Thank you so much for this amazing comment. Much appreciated 😊
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Herzliches Dankeschön
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Wow! Superb! 💟
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Thanks a lot dear! 😊💕
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The weaving of emotions is beautiful.
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Thank you so much Kritika! 😊💕
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Welcome always 🙂 (Heart)
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You always draw attention to your sophisticated, original poetry. Thank you,
Joanna
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Thank you so much dear! Your comments always bring a smile to my face 😊
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👌🏽
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😊
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wow…powerful.
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Thank you! 😊🌸
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You’re welcome. You have a real way with words.
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😀😀
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Love love love love it!
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Thank youuu!! 🌸
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