Divine spaces
in stirring souls
Nebulae between stars
Fields between particles
Blackouts between dreams
Crackling, sparks between flames
Ascent and descent between notes
Stillness between breaths
I am somewhere between
tripping and rising
Unfathomable sigh
~Inside spaces~
Sigh unfathomable
Rising and tripping
Between somewhere am I
Breaths between stillness
Notes between descent and ascent
Flames between sparks, crackling
Dreams between blackouts
Particles between fields
Stars between nebulae
Souls stirring in
spaces divine
© 2020 | Prerna |
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Wonderful!!!
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Thank you Luisa! 😊
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That would be so hard to do. You succeeded.
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It’s easy when you get the flow! Thank you so much for reading 😊
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Wow, beautiful. Both versions offer such different perspectives of varying intensity of the experience. Cleverly crafted! Nice one 🙌
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Couldn’t agree more as well
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Thanks a ton! 😀
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Thank you so much! Your delightful words are very encouraging 😊
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Great
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Thank you!!
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This is so cool and beautifully written, Prerna! I love this so much!! Such a creative idea and you carried it out so well 🥰💕
Love these lines especially:
“I am somewhere between
tripping and rising”
So beautiful!
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Aww thank you so much Wardah! Your comment filled me with happiness 😊💖
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You’re so welcome!! 🤗❤
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Exquisetley crafted. I had not noticed the design, it was flawless
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it 😊
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Beautiful! Thanks for checking out my blog recently!
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Thank you! It was a pleasure to visit your side 🙂
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It is so meaningfully beautiful in both the ways. Very enjoyable and makes to read again.
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Thank you so much dear! Your words bring me immense delight 😊💕
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My pleasure 😍
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Do you intend to publish your works? I think you write so well that you should.
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Right now I write just as a hobby and I don’t have a huge collection. I am so delighted and honoured that you think my work is worthy of publishing 😊 maybe someday I will!! 💕
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Beautiful poetry Prerna
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Thank you Smitha!! 😊💕
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Wow! Absolutely stunning! Loved it! 😍🌸
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Ahh thank you so much!! 😊💕
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“Between somewhere am I … stillness between breaths”, such depth in these words and your poetry. Remarkable!
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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked this. Your kind words have thrilled me 😀
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Creative and beautiful, Prena🤩🧡
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Thank you so much Sonam 😊💖
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awsm❣️❣️
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Thank you Shiva 😀
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Lovely! thanks for sharing this 🙂
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Thank you so much Alice 😊💖
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fantastically clever. well done!
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Thanks a lot Ben! I’m so glad you like it 😊
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lovely, creative
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Thanks a million! 😀
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Great piece of writing 👍
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Thank you so much!! 😀
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Wonderful poem Prerna!🥰😃
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Thanks a lot Anjali! 😊💖
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Your welcome Prerna🤗❤️
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Amazing…….keep going
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Thank you Lavanya!! 😊💖
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❤
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Never knew of palindrome poetry… beautifully written….both ways… really awesome 💟💟
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Thank you so much!! I am so delighted by such lovely words 😊💕
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Shoot! This is so fabulous 💖
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Hey, Thanks a lot!! 😊💖
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much Anmol! 😊
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Beautiful! A palindrome poem is quite the ambitious undertaking.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating! I’m so glad you enjoyed this piece 😊
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Omg I’ve never read a palindrome poetry before!! That must have been incredibly difficult. Impressed 🙆♀️🤗 XX
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Thank you so much! I’m thrilled to know that you enjoyed the piece.
It’s easy when you catch the flow 😀
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It’s a beautiful poem and I love space too😊
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Aw thank you so much! 😊
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Loved this one so much Prerna, especially the roller coaster that this one takes the reader on. It’s in these moments clarity sometimes hits us hard like the rough gush of winds. Excellent. 😇
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Thank you so much Harsh! Delighted to know that you enjoyed the writing.
Oh yes, that true! 😇
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😇
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Wow, really amazing poetry and beautifully written 💝🤗💐🤗💝🤗💝
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Thank you so much!! Thrilled by your amazing comment 😀
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You are always warm welcome💝🌹🤗
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Beautiful poem! Very well-penned! ❤
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Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the poem 😊💕
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You’re so welcome. 😀
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Its nice!
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Thank you 😊
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This is beautifully written! Mine would never come out so flawless and magnificent. Bravo!
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Thank you so much Angie! Delighted to know that you enjoyed the writing. 💕
You should give it a try! 😀
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Wow, this is fantastic! Reading through it, it felt very wave like yet reflective… then finding out it was a palindrome it all made sense as to how the symmetry felt so perfect by the end! Never saw a poem of this style before. Wonderful work!
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Oh thank you so much dear Lia!! It feels great coming from an amazing poet like you 💖 I am so thrilled by your lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed this piece 😊
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Prerna… thank you for your kindness, truly. Really warms my heart in such a wonderful-feeling way. 🥰🙏💖 Yes this poem is really brilliant. 🔆🤩
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🙏🏻😊💕
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Just beautiful.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Hey hi Prerna!
Myself jheel from krisha’s cosy corner!
I have tagged u for the OUTSTANDING BLOGGER AWARD on my blog….Do check it out and tell me how u liked it…
Here is the link to that post – https://thecosycorner1788007.wordpress.com/2020/10/25/3-in-1-award-post-my-hiatus-announcement%f0%9f%98%8c/
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Hey Jheel! Thank you so much! I am honoured 😊 will check it out for sure!
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Welcome dear! Great!
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this is just so amazing! amazing choice of words, profound and poignant!!
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Thank you so much Arwa! I am so glad you like it 😊💖
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I’ve never heard of palindrome kind of poetry but it seems a good way to get started. I also think the contrast you use here lend well to this form of writing.
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating! Glad you liked it 😊
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You crafted this beautifully.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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This is awesome.. So much intriguing. You awakened the inner man inside me
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Thank you so much!
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