
Gone are the
sharp contours
Mellowed down
are the shades
of black and brown
Grey and greyer
Darkness bright
and shady light.
In the mist of it all
I set forth on
a familiar track
unfamiliar now it seems
Never have I ever
ventured into the unknown
well-known now it seems
For new depths
am I exploring
of a spiritual realm
veiled by the
soft translucence
of earth’s moist breath
In the mist of it all
oblivion I cross
and as it d i s s o l v e d
into my cold
selfish palms
it did plant
a last vapoury kiss
Clear is it now
both within and without
© 2020 | Prerna |
Wonderful piece.
“In the mist of it all
oblivion I cross
and as it d i s s o l v e d
into my cold
selfish palms
it did plant
a last vapoury kiss
Clear is it now
both within and without”
xoxo
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Thank you so much dear Gabriela! I am so glad you liked this piece of writing 😊
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Oh, I have so many questions to ask you still, Gabriela!
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That’s really lovely ❤❤
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Thanks a lot Akshita! 😀💖
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My pleasure prerna🤗🤗❤
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This is a beautiful poem!
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Thank you dear! 💕
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How beautiful
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Thanks a bunch! 😀
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You’re welcome 😊
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Wow… Beautifully penned! 💕
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Thank you so much! 😀
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Gorgeous writing, Prerna. Soothing and serene imagery! ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much dear Rishika! 😊💖
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Your poetry gives me peace.
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Thank you so much! This means a lot to me 😊
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Beautifully penned!❤
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Thanks dear Nawazish! 😊💖
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Beautiful 💙
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Thank you Era! 💖
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😊🤗
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Simply magnificent….crazy writing
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Thanks a lot Navin! 😀
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You’re welcome! ✨
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This is so beautiful, the poetry and the picture! Love this part:
“Never have I ever
ventured into the unknown
well-known now it seems”
You have such a wonderful way with words!! 👏❤
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Ahh thank you so much Wardah! Pleased to know that you liked it 😊 sending lots of love and light 💖
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You’re welcome Prerna!! 😊❤
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How very deep! Crossing into realms with the poem……
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Oh thank you so much dear Aushana! 😊💖
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You stays always amazing with profound writings, so deep and beautifully crafted words.📝👌👌
Keep writing Prerna!😇
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Thank you so much Prashant! This means a lot. Keep encouraging 😁
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Each line has an immense depth Prerna..
loved the picture and your poem. Where was this taken ?
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Thank you so much dear Nima! This picture is from my trip to Leh-Ladakh 😊
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Ok 🙂
Lovely 🙂 ❤
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I love to read your compositions .. really beautiful
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Thank you so much dear! This made my day 😊💖
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Prerna, what an inspiring and beautiful photo! Your poem is so skillfuly-composed and meaningful! ❤ Wonderful post!
Have a great weekend! Cheryl 🙂
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear Cheryl! Your kind words warmed my heart 😊💖
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A beautiful and soothing piece! 💕
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Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating! 😊💕
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“Clear it is now, both within and without.”
Enjoy your clarity. Impress it into your memory and it will sustain you when the fogs roll back in.
Thanks for the beautiful poem. Dr. Bob
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These lovely words are so delightful and inspiring. Thank you for reading and appreciating 😀
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What a brilliant piece Prena, expressing the dark and the light, of the unknown, inside and outside. Such well crafted poetry.
Much love ❤️ Cindy
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Thank you so much dear Cindy! I am thrilled to know that you like it 😊💕
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You are most welcome! Have a great weekend!!! ❤️👏👏👏👏🤗
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You too, dear! 🌸
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Thanks 👊🥰
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Beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you 😀
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It’s so deep and beautiful..good one friend..😊👍🏻
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Thank you so much dear! 😊🌸
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Awesome
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Thank you!! 💕
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🤩
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Such an amazing picture Prerna. So magnanimous the mountains. The poetry is so smooth with the picture. Excellent. Loved it. 😇
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Thank you so much Harsh! I’m overwhelmed with happiness to receive such appreciation!! Yes, the mountains always amaze me 😇
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The pleasure was all mine Prerna. 😇
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Mystical poem in the mist and the picture too is so beautiful and lovely, Prerna 🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Ahh thank you so much Kamal! Such a beautiful comment 😊💗
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You are always welcome dear Prerna 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Gorgeous writing Prerna. And I love that picture 😍
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Thank you so much Radhika! So glad you like it 💗
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Our way
begins
before the big bang
in, through the body
in today’s now
it takes
Decades
the
little light
of consciousness
to become clear
that soon
also again
into the cosmos
disappears
goes out
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Lovely! Thank you for stopping by and expressing your thoughts. Much appreciated 😊
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👌👌
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Thanks Akshita! 😊
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Lovely!! Beautifully penned!!
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Thank you dear Sakshi! 😊💕
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Awesome capture…great picture!! Excellent composition!
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Thank you so much dear Indira! I am truly glad to know that you like it 😊
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Nice post and pictures ☺️
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Thank you Shreya! 😀💕
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Your welcome 😊
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Lovely piece
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Thanks dear! 😊
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Uwc😊😊😊
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Gorgeous and amazing 😍
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Thanks a ton! I am delighted by your lovely comment 😊
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A pleasure 🌼
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Which trek you were on?
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Umm so this is from my journey to Khardung La Pass, Leh.
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Lucky you. Pic is beautiful as your post.
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Ahh thanks a lot Yash! 😊
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This is deep. Lovely
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Thank you!! Have a nice day 😀
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Loved this piece!💙
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Thank you so much 😀💖
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That was awesome! Keep writing!
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Thanks bud! 💜
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You are an amazing thinker, words flow beautifully from you
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Thank you so much dear! You words always inspire and motivate me 😊💖
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This is brilliant..!
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Thank you so much Ket! 😀
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Wow..! A beautiful portrayal ! Could feel the chill within while reading. Imaginative & Real 💖
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Thank you so much Vijay! I’m glad you could connect with it 😀
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Really a beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much Madhura! 😊
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Oh wow!! Such a marvellous piece💞
“For new depths
am I exploring
of a spiritual realm
veiled by the
soft translucence
of earth’s moist breath”
Loved these lines🌹
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Thanks a lot Ishita! I’m thrilled by your lovely words of appreciation! 💖
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Nice 😀😀
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Thanks a lot Nehal! 😀
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Nice
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Thank you!!
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The picture is perfect for such a beautiful poem!
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Ahh thank you so much Diane! 😊💗
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Beautiful. Just beautiful. Your use of language is so 😍
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Thank you so much dear! I am so grateful for these lovely words from you 😊💖
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I love this! Exquisite ☺️
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Thank you so much Avni! 😊💕
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Of course!!! ☺️
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I love this too!😊
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Ahh thank you so much! That is really sweet 😊💖
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Wonderful piece
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Thank you Sakina! 😊
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Beautiful expression…lovely and interplay of words…Yes that’s what we look forward to..’being clear within and without’..
Stay blessed 🙏
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Krish! Very true 😊 have a great day!
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